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Ray Sweatman's avatar

Cool rhythm and flow in dystopia

Jay Noah Garrick's avatar

The sibilance and assonance are really satisfying. I am also a huge fan of using italics to quote or differentiate voices in poetry. Really well done. I'm usually into longer lines, but the informal ryhme schema here kept pulling me through the poem.

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