This is really powerful. It reads like a revelation of monstrous and destructive technology, maybe a bit Lovecraftian but with a shimmer of hope and beauty at the end. Thanks for sharing it. 🙏 Where God can’t shine is an amazing line.
Thank you. I’m pleased you liked it. I adapted it from a dream my protagonist had in https://www.enternyxus.com/p/a-game-of-life, but that was on a galactic scale. If you want, skip to the more poetic dream sequence, in italics, somewhere in the middle.
This is really powerful. It reads like a revelation of monstrous and destructive technology, maybe a bit Lovecraftian but with a shimmer of hope and beauty at the end. Thanks for sharing it. 🙏 Where God can’t shine is an amazing line.
Thank you. I’m pleased you liked it. I adapted it from a dream my protagonist had in https://www.enternyxus.com/p/a-game-of-life, but that was on a galactic scale. If you want, skip to the more poetic dream sequence, in italics, somewhere in the middle.
I did. Thanks. I’ll check that out as well.