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Ray Sweatman's avatar

Well done narrative!

Cael Lawenu's avatar

Thank you, Ray.

Megan's avatar

I enjoy the hidden gem of hope lurking in this. On to part 2!

Cael Lawenu's avatar

I'm super happy you like it so far!

Cael Lawenu's avatar

There's hope, but also hubris.

RESIST | FIGHT's avatar

Beautiful poem 💞

Eric McCormick's avatar

Very interesting style. Unique and engaging.