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Meditations On Permafrost's avatar

That resonates wonderfully and contains sentiment that is very ancient with observations of the new.

Cael Lawenu's avatar

I'm so pleased you liked it.

Gregory Blair's avatar

Oh, my gosh this is good! So many lovely bits I want to restack so others can read this! And "procrasturbator" is my new favorite word!

Cael Lawenu's avatar

Thank you, Gregory! I'm glad you liked it.

Paola Dabel's avatar

This got me thinking about your metaphor of the wheel. The water moves through the mill and keeps flowing after moving through it. Or are the rat, who stays on its wheel, thinking that the wheel, the cage defines the boundaries of its existence?

Cael Lawenu's avatar

Thank you for reading it with me! and yes, the river reframes the whole tension. It subsumes it.

Shellie Enteen's avatar

Yes. It does deliver that message.