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Chad Eastwood's avatar

Amazing. Very well-written. The idea of Erasure is a good one - disturbing to say the least. The whole tone reminds me a bit of Iain M. Banks - have you read him? It's sci-fi but there's always something very intelligently disturbing in his books.

Cael Lawenu's avatar

Thank you very much! I haven't read Banks. I'll check it out. Not sure how I missed your comment.

April Miles's avatar

“His grumbling stomach swallowed his smile.” That was a fire line. Such a good read.

Eric McCormick's avatar

Having been through a heavily weighted court system more than once, I can really relate to this piece.

Dionysian Joy's avatar

A good read. A lot of intrigue. I look forward to learning more about this condemned man and his future in isolation.

LV Cooper's avatar

Quietly dark. Reading “Name Redacted” was haunting.